How long have we been waddling in this God-forsaken swamp? An hour? Two? Didn’t bring my watch. I don’t normally wear my watch when I jump from airplanes. I did wear a parachute. And a helmet…
*
The day had started well that Sunday morning. Meeting at 7:30AM. Clear African skies over the Gabonese Air Force military airport where the Para-Club has its “head office.” No hangover from last night at the Mounts of Crystal nightclub. We knew we’d be jumping early, so we only hit my bottle with caution. Coupla drinks was fine. Weather report said ground speed at the Drop Zone was close to nil. Good.
We geared up, main ‘chute on our back, emergency ‘chute in the front. Checked and rechecked our equipment and our vis-à-vis. Climbed into the Nord-Atlas twin propeller. Took off to the drop-zone. Peachy.
I was in the second stick. A stick is a group of jumpers who jump in quick succession. Usually three.
My jump was fine. It might have been my fifth of sixth jump. I’d graduated from round, standard issue paratrooper ‘chute (with which you can’t do sh… zip. Just jump and be careful where you land). The new ‘chute was a beauty, with a slit across half of the sail. You could turn left, right, speed forward, put the “brakes”. Pick up your landing spot. A Beaut’.
Uneventful jump for me. Didn’t lose my helmet up there. (Had happened once before.) Ground speed was indeed practically zero. Perfect, when you’re trying to avoid one of the many rocks on the drop zone. I landed a dozen yards away from the target plate. Not too bad.
As all sticks landed fine, all the equipment had been gathered, we were all enjoying a nice fresh beer. (The Ice-Box is one of the many wonders of Western civilisation.) All commenting on the jump. The veterans discretely giving feedback to the juniors. Peachy. Again. Until someone asked:
“Where’s Joël? Has he gone back to the city already?”
“I don’t think so…Maybe he went for a leak? To the trees there?”
All turned towards the trees at the edge of the swamp. No Joël.
“And what about Jean-Pierre and Jean-Claude?”
None of the three were in sight. Joko, our “unofficial” leader (400-500 jumps under his belt) said:
“They were in the last stick. They jumped after me. Joël wanted to jump from a higher altitude… Damn!”
A quick check-up was done with all, earlier jumpers, the “ground crew”. The ground crew was basically wives of the most senior and a few non-jumping friends… Somebody had to come in cars and pick us up, right? The drop zone was a few miles away from Libreville. Someone said:
“I think I saw three ‘flowers’ high, but to the East.’ Flowers was how we called the ‘chutes when they opened.
“Damn! Damn!” Joko said. “They must have dropped them too early, smack above the swamp.”
The drop zone was located south of the harbour of Owendo, between the sea to the West, and a swamp to the East. Dropping is not exactly a science. A minor difference in seconds, given the plane’s speed, and the wind, and you could end up in trees. Or in the sea. Happened after I left. All jumpers swam their way back to the shore, but we lost three good ‘chutes. Or you could end up way East in the swamp.
“They could be hurt,” Diego said. He was former French Legion. Took command. “We need to form search parties. Now! Volunteers?”
In five minutes, two search parties were set up. Diego would take three with him and enter the swamp from the North-West. I was in the second search party, headed by Joko, along with my good friend Claude, getting in from the South-West. The idea was to enter the swamp in parallel routes and turn south or north to meet at one point inside the swamp. And hopefully find Joël and the other members of his stick. Not too concerned about Joël. He was former Special Forces. He could manage. And get his team out of trouble. Unless he was hurt…
We had no flares. No radio… No cels of course then. No compass. Those former military turned back civilians were a bit low on equipment. ‘T was all right. Where would the fun be? Just before my group was about to enter the swamp, I turned around and asked Ginette, Diego’s wife:
“Ginette? Can we borrow your dog? If we get lost, I’m sure he’ll find his way back.”
“Sure, take him. He loves water and mud.”
And off we went into the “small dismal swamp.”
*
A swamp of that kind in Africa is called a “marigot”. Part mangrove, part small rivers. Lots, lots of mud. The kind of mud that’s called “poto-poto” in West Africa. A marigot would be the equivalent of a Bayou in Loo-Zee-Ana.
At first our progression was reasonably easy. Firm land for a while, then gradually, the earth turned into mud. Mud turned into mucky water. Strange things ran/swam away from our party. The dog was happy.
After a while, we were waddling knee-high in “troubled waters.” Then came the mangrove. A few trees here and there, aerial roots. Sometimes we had to climb on a maze of roots to move forward. Watching where you put your hands for support. Snakes you know…
To be continued…
Author’s note: This is a true story. From my days in Libreville, Gabon. My first job, in accounting and finance. It had to be in Africa, had it not?
*Part of the Mzungu chronicles. Mzungu, plural: wazungu. Mzungu is a Bantu (Swahili) word used throughout East Africa from Uganda to Kenya to Tanzania to Zambia and in the great lakes region, from Rwanda, Burundi, to Congo Kinshasa. It means “white man”, or woman. The origin of the name dates back to the 18th-19th century, when European explorers came to East Africa searching for the source of the Nile, the gold mines of Solomon, or the Mountains of the moon, what have you. It literally means traveller or wanderer. Africans then, could not understand why Europeans could not stay in place, why they had to move all the time. They thought Europeans were a tad crazy. Mimi na mzungu!
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Oh my goodness. I knew you were going to say this was a true story!
Can’t wait for la suite!
Haha! Ça doit être agaçant comme je fais beaucoup de textes à la première personne, fiction ou non-fiction, de ne pas savoir jusqu’en bas…
La suite et fin en principe Jeudi…
Non. Je trouve ça le fun.
Sweet! Je vais continuer à me rattrapper avec les autres 😉
Haha! Je viens de finir un texte un peu plus long. 9000 mots. Une histoire que j’avais en tête depuis longtemps… Maintenant il faut que je vois comment je la “case” dans le blog…
Bonne soirée.
9000? Good gawd. Tu sais, j’ai essayé de lire comment il s’appelle. Le gîte kekchose.. Telllllement long ses posts…
Bonne soirée à toi
Ahh… Oui, un blog sur la Bretagne, très bie documenté, mais les textes sont très longs… Je lui ai dit d’en faire un livre. On l’achètera…
Trop long dans le monde du blogue. Lorsqu’on en a plusieurs à lire, on ne peut (ni veut) consacrer autant de temps sur un.
Exactement, quand on essaie de visiter les amis au moins de temps en temps, on peut difficilement passer une demi-heure à lire UN post.
Mets-en!
To be continued… you expect us to remain patient with a cliff-hanger like that?
I’ll have a word with the producer… the end on Thursday in theory…
Thrilling! Can’t wait for the next episode…
Dank je wel Peter. Donderdag (If I’m not mistaken)
Il y a eu une grosse expédition de recherche multidisciplinaire au fin fond de la Guyane. C’était dans l’humidité constante sauf pour les chercheurs botaniques sur les inselbergs. Une nuit, une chercheuse n’est pas rentrée et est restée introuvable. Elle a été retrouvée au petit matin et immédiatement évacuée en hélicoptère.
Belle journée à toi, Brieuc.
Je veux bien le croire. Ces coins-là sont dangereux. C’est pour ça qu’on est parti à leur recherche, avec même pas un opinel en poche.
J’espère que la chercheuse s’en est tirée?
Suite et fin Jeudi…
La chercheuse s’en est tirée … choquée.
J’imagine… Et elle a eu de la chance, dans la forêt, à un kilomètre on peut rester perdu des jours ou des semaines. Il vient d’y avoir un cas aves des enfants, chai plus où.
Cet “À suivre…” arrive un peu trop tôt à mon goût 😀
Haha! Toutes mes excuses Mélie. J’ai peut-être tort, mais j’essaie d’éviter les textes trop longs. Limite (auto-imposée) d’environ 1000 mots. Mais les histoires font ce qu’elles veulent. Et quand je compte les mots à la fin je coupe…
Suite et fin Jeudi.
Bises.
Argh, cliff hanger!!
Oops… The end is coming. Next Thursday…
Looking forward to it!
Sounds pretty exciting for someone there on a finance job!
Haha! I had in BA in Business. Finance was never my strong suit, I prefer Marketing. After hours I got together with a group who jumped out of airplanes for fun. I said: “Can I play too?”. Got trained. Jumped. A dozen times. Each jump an adventure. This was one of the strongest.
The end is coming on Thursday.
Hope part II is soon. We’re swamped!
Haha! Just did a final checkout. Tomorrow Thursday. Around mid-day.
Excellent, I look forward to it.
I’ll be back for part 2!
Scheduled tomorrow Thursday around 12 noon.
Okay… I might be an Achiles from the fable, because I have one too. I wrote it down!
👍🏻
Oooh, this is such a good story. You ended at a very inconvenient, for the reader, place. Not a cliff hanger exactly but a good place to stop.
Dankie Robbie… My problem with some of my short stories is that they seldom fit in 1,000 words which I consider a limit for a post. So I have to split in two… (Or I think I have to split…😉)
The end shall be posted tomorrow around 12noon Central Time. That should be 8PM your time. (You’re in Jo’burg, right?)
Yes, I am in Joburg 💖
I remembered that. Neighbours with Douglas. Part two post.
Totsiens Robbie.
🤩 you have a good memory. I am going to Oslo later in May. I’m very excited
One tries. 😉
Oslo now? (Never been there. Had no clients in Norway I guess. LOL) It should be very interesting… Nordic countries are very civilised… For how long?
Oh no, a cliffhanger! I hope to read soon that you found them safe and sound!
Can’t tell. The end will be posted tomorrow at 12PM Central. Should be 7PM Uk time if I’m not mistaken…
You tell a good story. No crocs?
Thank you Paul. It is a good question, understandable from your part of the world. We met none, though there might have been some small ones…
Stay tuned tomorrow at 12PM Central time US. That would be… about 2AM Friday… You’re on the West side, near Perth, right?
West indeed 🙂
Good. (My memory is still working a bit)
😉
I hope chapter 2 will be posted soon.
Tomorrow Thursday at 12 Noon Central… 😉
YAYAYA!
Good to see not all of us have succumbed to the illusion of virtual reality, and still trying to experience the real, upholding those instincts that guaranty our species continuum.
True. Though I must confess that was a while ago. “In my salad days when I was green and foolish.”
🙏🏻
Captivating as all your stories. 🙂
No compass? Nowadays one can find small toy compasses on cigarette lighters, pocket knives, and whatever other gimmicks one could think of – thanks to the chinese who manufacture those. 🙂
No GPS back then either I suppose. “Within hundred yards turn left. You have reached your lost friends… I mean destination” 😆
Yeah, there were times when humans possessed a sense of orientation. Not ‘nymore.
See you in part two… hopefully. 🙂
Second half of the 70’s. That’s why I borrowed the dog. Part Two coming up.
I know, I know…. Was just kiddin’. 😀
I know you were…
There really was nothing at hand. Except for the flares, which nobody had thought about before. Part two just went up.
Getting there…
Je ne suis pas le genre d’homme qui souhaite faire du parachutisme et ouvrir mon parachute à la dernière minute. Je désire ouvrir mon parachute immédiatement et savoir qu’il n’y aura aucune surprise tout au long de la descente.
Très juste. De fait, les novices, dont j’étais, attachaient un cable à l’avion, et le parachute s’ouvrait en automatique. Ce qui n’empêchait pas des surprises. (Ça pourra faire l’objet d’une autre histoire)
Merci de votre visite et commentaire…
Ce serait l’approche sage. Bonne chance, mon ami.
Merci cher ami. (Not jumping from planes “no more” anyway…) 😉
Ps. Mes compliments pour ton Français… 👍🏻
You said all sticks landed fine and all equipment had been gathered, so I was not expecting to discover one stick missing during beer! This is suspenseful, and interesting and I’m glad your part two will arrive so quickly. 🙂
I was trying to convey the general impression. We were about 5-6 sticks, 15-18 jumpers plus friends and family below. The fact that we jumped in succession added to the “fragmentation”. Each jumper has to manage alone in the air, then land, grab and pack the equipment, get together, about 20-30 people, 3 missing? Don’t realise until a moment. (Happened in another totally different circumstance which I’ll to write soon).
Part two is up. Let’s waddle.
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Wow. Pins and needles.
😀 (The end has been posted already…)
Talking about needles and pins… 🙂
Didn’t know them. So many pop-rock groups popped up then…
Oh yeah! Like mushrooms after rain. ‘t was well before my time anyway. Strange thing though, glimpses of their work come up every now and then in loosely related situations, such as advertisements or whatever, and they kinda stick to one’s mind. No idea when and how I first heard a very small piece of that song, and can’t even swear it was this or that band that played it (if you search around there have been a few bands that covered this song, Smokey included), but the construct “needles and pins” with it’s distinctive sound chords stuck to my memory. This time I just searched for the oldest, hopefully original version of it. And all that for a simple word play. 🙂
“The dog was happy” is a neat sentence
Thank you Derrick. Coming from you means a lot to me. Of course you and a few others, realised that the dog was the real hero of this story…
Merci cher ami.
So many intriguing stories!
Will pop over to part 2, and I don’t remember getting a notification about these 2 posts.
You might have been unsuscribed by WP. Anything is possible…
But I continue to subscribe repeatedly – WP is becoming infuriating. 😦
All platforms are… Sadly.