The Piano (the end)

Previously on “The Piano”. Carlos, a concert pianist finds a work piano in a music store. The store and the owner are odd. The shop-owner tells Carlos the Piano belonged to a famous and ill-fated musician of the XIXth century. The Piano seems to have a life of its own. Carlos and his friend Maria, another musician, try to unravel the mystery of The Piano and the ‘Unfinished Concerto’ written by The Piano’s original owner.

For Charlotte and George

5

They arrived at Carlos’ apartment around six. It was night already. The Piano looked like any other piano. Maria looked at it and would even play a few notes.

“I don’t like your piano. It has an air of…”

“Melancholy? Sadness?” said Carlos.

“Yes. No. Worse. It’s… it’s giving me the chills. Hey, how did Schopenhauser die?” Maria asked.

“I don’t know exactly. I think they found him dead at his home. Near the Piano maybe. I don’t remember very well. There aren’t many details about him. At that time, he was a total unknown. I know he died very young, 22, give or take.”

“I don’t like it. Your piano scares me.”

“I’ll cover it with a bedsheet. Is that better?”

“Yes.” said Maria. She moved away from the Piano:

“Aren’t you going to offer me anything?”

“Yes, of course. Would you like some wine?”

Ten minutes later, they had completely forgotten about The Piano. They spent two hours in another world, enjoying each other’s presence. Carlos looked at her, trying to discover what was behind those ever-changing eyes. He watched her move around the apartment, committing her moves to memory. He thought of the many times they’d played music together, the rehearsals, the concerts. He knew it could be a long road. Her divorce had left her on edge. Carlos wasn’t even sure the papers were signed.

Maria stood up.

“I have to go.”

“Can you do me a favour tomorrow?” said Carlos.

“In the morning? Yes. Of course. I don’t have rehearsals” Maria answered.

“Can you go to the instrument store?”

“Sure. What do you need?”

“While I’m in London, I want you to ask the old man everything he knows about The Piano, about Schopenhauser. Here’s the address: 29 bis Boulevard Beaumarchais.”

“Will do. First thing in the morning.”

“You sure you don’t want to come to London?”

“Sure. I’m not going. But I’ll leave you a memory.” Maria kissed him lightly on the lips. She looked into his eyes then ran down the stairs.

6

That night was worse for Carlos. He dreamt of Schopenhauser, of Maria, of London, of the music store, of The Piano.

The rain beating on the glass roof woke him up. He’d gotten up in his sleep. He was sitting on the bench, in front of the Piano. He had a pen in his hand. In front of him, five more sheets filled with the same musical theme he had started the day before.

7

London, Thursday…

Maria dear,

I missed the return flight. Or rather, it was full. Same thing. I don’t know why I’m writing this if I’ll see you in Paris tomorrow. Perhaps it’s a way of noting down what happened before I go mad.

I arrived in London without a glitch, at least until Heathrow. Then, as usual, it took me longer to get from the airport to the centre than from Paris to London. When I finally reached the Royal Academy of music, I asked the librarian (your typical English lady, with rosy cheeks and perfectly coiffed white hair, who practically invited me to tea and scones) whether I could make a copy of Schopenhauser’s manuscript.

“How extraordinary!” she said. “Someone asked for it yesterday. It should be in this drawer.” She opened the drawer of music manuscripts and books to be filed. Not there.

“Ah!” she said. “Now I remember. The gentleman who consulted it told me he’d left it on the day’s documents table. We don’t file them until the next day. It should still be there.”

Obviously, it wasn’t on the table. I asked the increasingly concerned librarian, if she could look up Schopenhauser in the Encyclopedia of authors-composers, musicians, whatever. She found the Encyclopedia, and almost fainted: someone had cut out a page: the one for SCH.

I was shaking. The librarian was in shock. Nothing like that had ever happened to her before. She dug up the card of the gentleman who’d consulted the manuscript. Name was indecipherable, with an old-fashioned handwriting. But the address was perfectly clear: Boulevard Beaumarchais 29 bis, Paris. The music store’s address.

I remembered you were going there in the morning. I panicked. I ran out of the archives room, looking for a telephone to warn you off the store. I called the Symphony, you weren’t there. I called your home. Spoke to your son. He told me you’d come home for lunch quite angry, ranting about wild goose chases, but he knew better than ask why. At least you were fine. In a way.

Again, I don’t know why I’m writing all this. Or maybe, I know why. How scared I was that something might have happened to you. This Piano thing is getting out of hand.

Bye (Wish you’d’ve come to London. Such a great place…)

Carlos

8

When Carlos arrived in Paris on Friday, under intense rain, Maria wasn’t at the Symphonie. She’d left him a note:

My dear scoundrel,

First, I was p….d off. Now I’m beginning to think your story’s a joke.

Can’t tell you more now. I have a rehearsal at one.

See you here in the afternoon.

Ciao,

Maria

Carlos left his letter for Maria at the reception of the Maison de Radio-France, promising the doorman that he would cut him into little pieces if he didn’t hand it to Maria, and please, to tell her to wait for him. The doorman laughed and promised that he would not only deliver the letter but would also tie Maria up in the reception until Carlos returned.

Carlos managed to get a taxi, under the unending rain. He got his flat after crossing a near-flooded Paris. The Piano seemed to be waiting for him, almost sarcastic, in the twilight of the painter’s studio.

Carlos rummaged in a closet looking for his student papers. In the very last box he found what he was after: an ancient Xerox copy of Schopenhauser’s biography. Reading it after so many years gave him goosebumps.

Schopenhauser was born in Berlin, in a bourgeois family. He’d studied music from a very young age. Gave his first concert at 10. Had all the promise of a unique career, when he apparently committed suicide at the age of 22, throwing himself out the window of the fourth floor. Neighbours later reported hearing tremendous dissonance on The Piano.

Carlos was dumbfounded. How could he have forgotten that? He now remembered the analysis of the Unfinished Concerto they’d done in class. The teacher had commented that there was ‘something wrong, even abnormal’ in the structure of the concerto. No-one had actually been able to premiere the work. It was practically impossible to play.

Carlos looked at his watch. Five o’clock. Maria! The Symphonie.

9

The rain stopped when Carlos arrived at the Maison de Radio-France. Maria was waiting for him. He could see it in her eyes that she’d read his letter. They looked at each other for a few seconds. Hugged. Carlos couldn’t let go of her. He stroked her hair. To make sure she was all right. Maria ran her hand over his face, his hair, his neck.

“Carlos,” she said, “are you okay? You have to get rid of The Piano. Something is very wrong. The store…”

“You went to the store?”

“Carlos, there is no store! I don’t know who gave you this, this… God-forsaken piano, because the store doesn’t exist!”

“No way! I was there…”

“There is no store, Carlos! There is no number 29 bis on Boulevard Beaumarchais! Number 29 is a dry cleaner. Number 31 is a bakery. The other side of the street are even numbers. As in all Paris streets. There are no shops on the ground floor. They’re apartment buildings. You got a piano out of nowhere! Let me say it again: there is no music store. I even thought you’d sent me on a wild goose chase. Pissed me off until I read your letter…”

They stayed another hour at a café around the block, analysing everything, trying to understand. There was a Piano. There was no store. Rain was threatening again. Maria wouldn’t let go of Carlos’ hand. She tried to convince him not to return to the apartment. Carlos said:

“Nothing’s gonna happen today. I’ll call someone tomorrow to take The Piano away. Emmaüs. A second-hand dealer. Anybody.”

They stood up. Carlos hugged Maria and said:

“Leave me another memory.”

Their second kiss felt as if it would be the last. As Carlos ran down the stairs of the Métro, to get out of the rain, Carlos remembered that the ‘Unfinished Concerto’ was originally called ‘Rains of March’…

10

The door to Carlos’ apartment wasn’t locked. The concierge had a key, she must have brought up something for Carlos and forgotten to lock the door.

There was a large-size, brown envelope on top of the Piano. Carlos opened it with shaking hands. He knew what was inside. He tore the envelope open. Yellowed music sheets fell to the floor.  Schopenhauser’s manuscript.

11

Maria returned to her empty apartment: her son was with her ex. She called Carlos. The answering machine picked up, which could be good, because Carlos never left the answering machine on when he was home. Maybe he’d gone to a friend’s.

12

Carlos stared at the manuscript. Didn’t dare touch it. The Piano was waiting for him. He picked up the sheets on the floor. Began to read the music. After two pages, he stopped, the colour drained from his face. Where was what he’d written those past days? He didn’t need much of a confirmation. He knew that the theme he had written and the theme of “Rains of March” were the same.

Carlos was finishing Schopenhauser’s concerto. The Piano was conducting.

13

The lightning woke Maria in the middle of a nightmare. She’d been dreaming of Carlos. All she remembered from the dream was Carlos in a large room, sitting in front of the Piano, writing. There were several sheets of music paper scattered on the floor.

Maria got up, dressed, and went out to get her car.

14

Carlos could no longer control his hands. His left hand ran across the keyboard. Playing. His right hand wrote note after note on the empty staves at the end of Schopenhauser’s manuscript. The rain was getting worse. Would the glass roof hold? The rain was pouring inside the flat from an open window. He got up to close the window.

15

Maria arrived at Carlos’ building at two in the morning. She had to wake the concierge up to open the front door. Ran up the six floors up to Carlos’ apartment. No lift. She banged on the door. No answer though she could hear the Piano playing a theme she’d never heard, a theme that howled with the wind and rain battering the building.

She ran down the stairs, tore the apartment key from the concierge’s hand, climbed up again to Carlos’ apartment. Opened the door.

The painter’s studio was filled with wild, savage music, The Piano at the centre of a musical storm. Carlos wasn’t playing. He’d finished writing Schopenhauser’s ‘Unfinished Concerto’. The Piano alone was playing.

Maria screamed: “Carlos! No!”

Carlos was about to jump through the open window. Maria understood in a second that she would never be able to reach him on time. She had to stop The Piano.

16

Maria saw a vase on a low table. She grabbed it and threw it with all her strength on the keyboard. The vase shattered, breaking into pieces, destroying several keys.

The music stopped. Carlos turned around. Saw Maria. As if waking from a nightmare, he stepped down from the window, towards Maria.

“You saved my life. I was going to throw myself out the window. Like Schopenhauser. The Piano was pushing me outside.”

“Yes. For a second, I saw you dead.”

They held each other tight. Carlos couldn’t let go of Maria. Maria couldn’t let go of Carlos. Eyes closed. Breathing in unison. Then, much later, they looked at each other.

“And now?” Carlos asked.

“Now what?” Maria asked.

“Let’s go to London?”

“Let’s.”

THE END

This is a work of fiction, the exclusive product of the author’s bonkers imagination. Any resemblance with actual situations, events, people dead or alive, would be a mere coincidence.

This story is for Charlotte, a very talented singer and her husband George, a very talented pianist. (Even though I suspect they were barely born when I wrote the original Spanish version…) See Charlotte’s wonderful blog here:

https://charlottehoatherblog.com/

(c) Martin-Onraët & Equinoxio; The Steinway name and logo (c) Steinway & sons.

99 thoughts on “The Piano (the end)

  1. Je savais bien que ce n’était pas les pianistes qui jouaient du piano mais les pianos qui jouaient du pianiste !
    Merci pour cette fin endiablée, Brieuc, et une belle journée à toi.

    • Viel dank Coeur de Feu. I’ve heard of Knut Hamsun. My parents had a few books of his. Haven’t read it.
      That is the very first story I wrote. Long time ago. Around ’92-93. On my first laptop, in a hotel room in New York. (Not a Chelsea hotel though). I was at a congress. There’s always plenty of idle time (or boring conferences). So I set out to write, just to see whether I could actually write a story. Beginning, main idea. Ending. I thought it worked so I kept on writing.
      Thanks for your support, Holly.
      Champagne everybody!

  2. OMG! What a fantastic writing. Please find a way to publish this so more can read!!! Dawn

    btw, I have a famous Baby Grand Steinway here in my living room, my daughter’s inheritance from her composer Grandfather, Gordon Jenkins . . . mine, thankfully, is benign!

    • Thank you Dawn. I tried agents in New York a while back. Gave up. All a bunch of arrogant people. Publishing is very difficult if you don’t know someone in the “industry”. It’s all right.
      A baby Steinway? Ohhh. How gorgeous… Keep it preciously. Is anyone playing it? Pianos are like horses, they need to (ride) play every day… 😉

    • Merci Mélie. Ravi que ça t’ai plu.
      La force du passé? C’est vrai. Je n’ai fait que suivre la tradition d’écrivains du XIXe siècle. Une malédiction qui dure au-delà du temps… Mais heureusement que Maria était là…
      Bises

  3. Well, Brian, that was a thrilling story. It’s like the Twilight Zone, only better.

    Thanks for letting me know it was done! I hope Charlotte likes it.

    Looking forward to your new drawing. You should see the art I posted this morning, from an exhibit I went to 10 days ago. WoW!

    Okay, be well! 🌹🎨

    • Thank you Resa. (I liked the Twilight zone when I was a kid. How a “normal” situation slides and slides into the non-normal…)
      Haven’t heard form Charlotte yet, eventually.
      Hopping to your blog. Though an “exhibit” sounds familiar…
      Take care… 🌹🤗

      • Sorry for my tardiness Brian. I took on a role last year between April to the end of June as acting Head of Music, I was between jobs and threw myself in with gusto.

        I prepared the children to do an all school proms in the park, featuring every child on a Shakespeare theme. I also taught drama and we put on MacBeth and studied Julius Caesar. A violin 🎻 Father’s Day presentation and I taught solo lessons.

        Then I got thrown the biggest curve ball, the Head wanted me to stay on as Director of Performing Arts, responsible for all the peripatetic music teachers, hiring new instrument teachers as the school was expanding, leading music, drama and dance. She gave me time off for my opera and concerts. I have been on the most amazing rollercoaster ride ever since.

      • What fantastic news Charlotte. You are immersed in music (with what I imagine is a steady income) and yet free for opera and concerts… Perfect.
        Teaching MacBeth to kids must be something. It is one of my favourite Shakespeare plays… (Tomorrow and tomorrow and tomorrow…)
        Congrats from all my heart.

      • Precisely, and thank you, to be honest I’m having the time of my life teaching mainly music, drama cover and dance cover to the most amazing children. I put on an opera written by Scottish Opera with the children this year. I sing in assembly and the children are loving opera and lied.

      • I’m sure you are a wonderful teacher. You have that spark in your eyes. Great work.
        (PS. What do you mean by ‘drama cover’?) (Or ‘dance cover’?)

      • I took dance classes myself since I was aged two in ballet and tap plus modules at the Royal Conservatoire of Scotland and over the years added contemporary dance all up to A level, ballroom and latin to gold medal and jazz and stage dance so I cover for the dance teacher if she isn’t available and I took a term of drama and cover lessons to prepare them for the Shakespeare play.

      • They enjoyed performing the MacBeth and learning the story, I also taught them stage sword fighting (I’d done a course in that) but not so much the Julius Caesar. It was an abridged version for year 6.

      • Stage sword fighting. Of course. Hadn’t thought of that. (I did fencing and riding when I was a kid. A perfect 19th century education).
        Obviously there has to be rules, even with – possibly – plastic swords… Wonderful that you took a course in that.
        The kids must have loved it…
        Haven’t read Julius Caesar. But I can imagine. Being a Frog I only read Macbeth, The tempest, (On business school programme if you can believe that) and King Lear, on my own…
        “When priests are more in word than matter,
        “When brewers mar their malt with water…

        “Then shall the kingdom of Albion
        “come to great confusion…”
        You must know many of those texts by heart I imagine, but this particular quote struck when I read Lear a few years ago. Very apt for many of today’s circumstances…
        But it’s all right. Keep teaching the kids to have fun and become great adults. 👏🏻

      • My school only did one Shakespeare text and not as a play (which I think is the way they should be taught).

        In High School I read Tartuffe, Our Countries Good, Frankenstein, Of Mice and Men and The Inspector Called as the examined books to study. For my 16th Birthday my parents bought me The Shakespeare Collection a rather large book with most of his famous plays in it. I worked my way through several of them as a number of operas are based on the plays such as Midsummer Nights Dream, and I was Hero in Much Ado About Nothing and Juliette in Romeo et Juliette.

        Best wishes
        Charlotte

      • Tartuffe in High School? Amazing. In French or in English? English texts and authors in the French system were only studied by extracts and in English class.
        Your parents gave you a great gift… You can go back to it from time to time…
        Midsummer and much ado I’ve only read extracts.
        And Juliette? Made for you wasn’t it?
        “Good good night, parting is such sweet sorrow
        I shall say good night till it be morrow.”
        (A character in one of my stories is a Flamingo, yes a Flamingo who learnt English by reading a Shakespeare book, so her conversation is full of Shakespeare quote.
        You might not have read it, It’s called “A night in Penang.” Let me know if you haven’t, I’ll send you the link.
        Cheers.

      • I sang Juliette in French Gounods version of the opera. Tartuffe we read and studied the English translation, my whole family acted out the parts with me at home to make better sense of it. Please do send me a link to your Flamingo talking in Shakespeare terms, I visited Stratford upon Avon and it was amazing how many sayings in regular daily parlance were Shakespeare quotes.

  4. Oh you have a flair for the dramatic. 🙂

    It was a nice story, gripping at times. A bit dark maybe. You could rewrite it as an alternate version for a happier end where he writes a good ending for the concerto and they have a huge success in a worldwide tour with the complete ‘Rains of March’. After he marries Maria of course. 🙂

    The original story in Spanish might be of interest to someone. You could attach it here somewhere as a document if you will. 😉

    • Haha! Dramatic? Of course. I’ve always considered just about any job is about telling a story. Goes for Marketing, for Advertisins of course or a simple Power point Market research presentation.
      I would ask my research executives as they prepared a report: “What’s the story? We need to keep the client on their toes. The sequence os ours. Start with a an unexpected info. End with the strongest.”
      NO, I’m done rewriting that story. Even with ChatGPT as a first tool, it means editing every single line. That’s the final story… LOL

    • Viel dank “Brigitte”.
      Schubert would be a good background. Though maybe Rachmaninoff?
      How did I get the story? I’ve probably written close to 50 stories, short or long… I don’t know. The best explanation I’ve ever read comes from Paul McCartney. (He can’t read music but he doesn’t need to.) I saw him in concert here in Mexico with Linda. Out of this world of course. In a interview he said: “How do I get my ideas for songs? I sit down at the piano. There are songs floating in the air. I pull one down on the piano, tape it. Then somebody writes the music score and voilà.”
      Me? It’s what I do with a story. I get an idea. “A piano”. Then I “write it down in my head”. Complete with an opening, a theme, even dialogues, then the end, which should be unexpected… (Not always works but it’s all right). I can spend days, weeks, months or even years with a story in my head. Once I sit down at the piano, I mean the computer, I write the entire story in a short time. No block (touch wood) I already have the story in my head…
      Gutte Nacht…

      • Interesting! I have to wait until a story “comes to me”. And then I have to write it down immediately, not because I might forget it, but because I simply have to write it. Weird.

    • Dankie Robbie. Some stories lead to a good ending. Others don’t. I have “killed” a few characters in a few stories just because the story could not end differently.
      You know the movie Casablanca with Bogart and Bergman. They actually shot two endings. One where Ingrid Bergman flies away and leaves Bogart. The otherall the contrary: Bergman unboards the plane at the last minute and stays with Bogart. When the director and main “crew” watched both, everybody said “no, no. She flies away”. 😉
      Happy week-end

    • Thank you Derrick. You are keen on details. I hadn’t thought about that, maybe because in French or Spanish one uses “presence” more than “company”. (I’ll keep that in mind for future stories…)
      Enjoy the week-end

    • That’s the idea. I just remembered Mozart in Amadeus. The very end when he’s dying and still dictating (or was it writing?) music… Thinking about it it probably inspired my rendering of Carlos getting up in his sleep and writing scores of music dictated by “The Piano”.
      Have a nice week-end Jan.

    • I can see where promotion can be an issue. Perhaps what you need is an opportunity. Being at the right place at the right time can cater poult you in a new beginning. Keep an eye out for open doors.

      Do you usually have hail this time of the year?

    • Thank you.
      I have. Considered. I have 30-40 short stories. Two novels. I tried agents in New York for a while. Very arrogant people. So I gave up. Rather spend my time writing.
      Borges (a magnificent author I wouldn’t even compare myself to) once said “I write for myself, my friends and family and to pass the time”. (He was published… and well deserved)
      Now? I have the advantage of this blog. Several -unknown but dear- people like you read my stories. And it is very gratifying.
      So thanks a mil.
      Take care.

  5. I enjoyed this story a lot! You have the gift to pull the reader into the tale in a few sentences. Or tale – rather another universe, filled with ghosts and secrets. I’m happy the two lovers got each other in the end, they deserve it. (I’m bit late with my reaction for I’m in Belgium right now, in the old university town of Leuven. No funky piano’s here and disappearing stores. Instead very good beers, lovely architecture and soft spoken people. It’s not Paris, agreed, but the good life is already very noticable 🙂 Tot ziens Brian.)

    • Thanks Peter. One tries, one tries.
      I’ve heard a lot of “Louvain” as we call it. The university is world famous. Never been there though. One day…
      Enjoy the beer.
      Tot ziens

  6. Wünderbar, Brieuc! Wonderfully written and the tension build-up was fantastic. Vraiment ta première histoire? Quel talent que tu as 🙂

    • Dank schön Dale. Ouais c’est vraiment ma première histoire. J’ècris en général d’un coup. ou en plusieurs séances, sans revenir en arrière. Une fois fini je laisse reposer et là j’édite sérieux. Surtout le découpage… C’est amusant. Et á fait plaisir de faire découvrir à d’autres.
      Bises.

    • You’re only too kind. But yes it was. I’ve had good influences, mainly in Advertising. Though I was not a “copywriter” I worked on a lot of ads, researching them to make sure they told the right story. I also had a great client in market research. He was at General Motors, I did European research for them. He was also a musician and song writer. (Wrote for Diana Ross). He’s slash my presentations in half at least. Telling me: “You can say the same with half the words.” (2 minute song writer, right). I was p.o.d at first then realised he was right. Probably helped my writing in every aspect. 😉

      • Ha, ha, he sounds like a Technical Writer! My partner calls me “Darth” when I edit his work. I think that’s why I find it hard to transition from writing technical content to creative writing. I always find myself slipping back to “telling” insead of “showing”. 😉

      • Haha. Darth? I can imagine…
        The guy was good. He was a composer. Also did market research to make ends meet between to “hits”, I guess.
        Now telling or showing… There isn’t such a big difference. I used to tell my execs to separate “reporting” (facts) from “editorials” (Interpretation)
        Facts (showing) belong to the main report
        Editorial belongs to recomendations and strategy…
        Now the order in which you present the facts is “Telling the story”. 😉

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  8. Wonderful. George would probably have told me off for smashing up the piano 😂. I’m joking.

    I loved the storyline and the characters and the suspense. Music is such a passion. I enjoy composing my professor used to say my ideas exceeded my skill level 😝he did enjoy my work he just wished I made time to finish everything! 😧 So again I can relate to unfinished manuscripts.

    I’ve taken up violin lessons it’s useful that violinists play the soprano line. I was at my teacher’s when her previous lesson ended, with my loaner violin. When the man came out he was explaining that his work colleagues had bought him a new violin for his birthday. My teacher was thrilled he had such a good quality new instrument and he asked her if she knew someone who needed his original violin, she looked over at me and said that I was using a loan instrument and was making good progress, he smiled and handed over his violin to me. I offered him some money for it, he refused. Very generous. So glad it had no spooky story attached to it.

    I would like to record another album this summer, however, like you said above promoting anything now is a nightmare, agents seem to be invisible to me. The streaming services have virtually ended cd sales and album downloads, so often you don’t cover the price of the recording studio and other costs of production. I’d like to do a Poulenc cycle I know written for children with a set of lullabies for my new nephew.

    • George might disapprove obviously but it was the only option wasn’t it?
      Love your violin story, there are still good people in this world. Bravo.
      (Violins are all right, it’s just a few pianos that turn evil. 😉) let me know if you manage to give George the story to read. When I wrote it I wondered whether I should include more “musical terms” from my piano fumbling days, but decided against it. I imagine you could feel the tempo as the story progressed.
      Poulenc? My, my. I don’t know him too well, I’m more inclined towards XIXth century composers, with a few exceptions.
      Nothing will ever be too good for your new nephew… 🙏🏻

  9. Great story Brieuc! Did you make up stories for your kids when they were little? I wish I had grandkids so that I could reproduce this for them on a dark windy night.

    • Merci “Carole”. No, I don’t really have children stories inside me, I wish I had, but I did tell them some of those stories (edited) at times. They particularly loved the “scary” ones. That would have been an example…
      Grandkids will come. Some day… (Give’em time) 😉

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