Two men were lying facedown on the ground. Both covered their head with their hands in a futile attempt at protection against the bullets and rockets that flew above. They were about twenty yards away from each other. Separated by an imaginary line. Border or combat line. Who knows? Who cares?
Were they civilians? Soldiers? Wearing a uniform? Combat fatigues? Hard to tell. They were covered with dust.
How long had they been lying on the battle ground? Who knows?
Both probably wondered that morning whether to stay put or get up and run. But where to? Meanwhile, the bullets, shells, rockets kept flying over their heads.
The ground was relatively flat. A former field? Or a city square? There was a couple of burnt-down tanks a hundred yards away to the West. Too far to provide cover. The fuming ruins of a building were scattered to the East. Another hundred yards. Give or take. Craters everywhere. Clouds of dust.
How long did they stay facedown on the ground? Minutes? Hours? Who knows? Who cares?
The firing and the explosions slowly came to an end. Still, both stayed facedown on the ground. Their hands over their heads.
After a while, silence crept in from all around. None of the men moved.
A distant siren blared. Hidden loudspeakers boomed from both sides :
“CEASE FIRE! CEASE FIRE! PEACE HAS BEEN SIGNED. CEASE FIRE! CEASE FIRE!”
After another few minutes of silence, no bullets, no rockets, no shells, no sirens, no speakers, one of the men looked up and around. Got up on his feet. Which of the two men? Who knows? Who cares?
Then the other man got up. Both started brushing the dust off their clothes with their hands. Both looked around at the desolated landscape. Until their eyes met.
One walked slowly, ever so slowly, towards the other. And stopped at an imaginary line. Border or front line? Or just a safe distance? Then the other moved slowly towards the same imaginary line. Stopped but a few yards away from the first man.
They looked at each other. No hatred in their eyes. Only two worn-down men looking at each other. Who spoke first? In what language? Who knows? Who cares? Maybe they spoke the same language. Maybe not. Or they understood the other’s tongue? Border people often speak several languages. If they were border people.
“Well. That was close,” said the first one.
“Yep”, said the other, still brushing the dust off his shoulders. Looking at the ruins all around them, he added: “Too close. We won’t make it next time, right?”
“No,” said the first one. “We can’t really keep on like that, can we?”
Did they know each other? Maybe they were neighbours before. Or not. Who knows? Who cares?
The first one looked around. At the destroyed buildings. At the burnt down tanks and said:
“Never again, right?”
“Never again,” said the other.
Both looked at each other for the last time. Both nodded a silent agreement. Each man turned around and walked away towards his own side, thinking:
“Never again.”
Never again !
Many thanks, Brieuc.
One can only hope, right? Bonne semaine mon ami.
Personnellement, ma sphère d’influence se limite à quelques milliers de mètres. Je ne peux que souhaiter qu’accumulation et propagation finiront par mettre les tyrans à bas. J’ai des doutes …
Bel après-midi à toi, Brieuc, et douceur et sourire.
Très vrai. Nous n’avons qu’un cercle d’influence de qqs kms…
La seule consolation c’est que les tyrans meurent aussi. A la longue…
Bonne nuit cher ami…
Never again…what a joke.
It is, isn’t it? A -bad- joke. I wrote this in my head, as I usually do, a very long time ago. Litlle did I know… I decided to write it dow on “paper” last week.
Sadly, as current events show, we will NEVER (learn).
🙏🏻
When money is concerned… and power… and dare I say it … men, it is guaranteed. Looooved the short story! More please. 👍
Dearest Edith, delighted you liked the story despite it’s sad “déjà vu” aspect…
There will be more
Merry Christmas to you and yours… Hugs
This is wonderfully written, Brian.
Dankje wel Peter. I wish that was true. But it will go on and on and on…
Very poignant!
Merci. I had this story in my head for many years. I was thinking WWII. But this year’s proven me wrong. Or the story. Just wrote it last week. At least it’s out of my head.
Stay safe. (Joyeux Noël nonetheless)
That’s what I thought reading it – it is, sadly, timeless 😦
Thank you! We have snow at present and temps of minus 2
very true. Timeless. Now, on the positive side it lasted a little over 70 years… 😉
Snow in Brittany? Wow. Not usual. I ‘m glad you have reserves of wood if I recall.
Merry Christmas my friend.
Joyeux Noël
Yes, we should always look for the positives! 😉
We do not often get snow here in central Brittany. The last time I think was almost two years ago. Thankfully, it never stays around for too long and they grit the roads regularly!
Merci! Je te souhaite un joyeux Noël aussi! 🙂
🎄
This was a kick in the gut of a story, such existential despair.
Kick in the gut? Thank you Liz. it’s a short story I’ve had in my head for years now. I’m glad It’s written. (Less voices in my head. LOL)
Sadly it was partly true. After WWII, it was the general consensus. Never again. That’s why the European Union was built, around yesterday’s enemies…
But there is always someone lurking around…
Glad you liked it. 🙏🏻
You’re welcome, Brian. I can see how that story would haunt you. Best to get it out of your head and onto the page.
Haha! If you knew how many stories still run around my head. 😉 But it’s all right. One at a time. I’m actually in the slow process of slowly writing them. One page at a time. What are your plans for Christmas?
My husband and I will do our Christmas Eve tradition of driving around looking at lights. On Chrstmas Day, we will eat lasagne and open presents with our daughter and son-in-law over Zoom. How about you?
Seeing the lights is always nice.
And I love the idea of a Zoom Christmas with your daughter. It reduces distance…
Here, family on my wife’s side is coming. It will be nice…
Have a wonderful Christmas, Brian.
U 2.
But now it’s less about enemies and more about keeping the war machine gravy train going.
Or simply about human stupidity? 😉
A wonderful piece. indeed. Wishing you a peaceful holiday season and New Year.
Thank you. On all counts.
Merry Christmas and a Happy new year to you.
PS. Just went to your site… Last post from June… I thought we had “talked” more recently… 😉
Is it really so long? How time flies when one is having fun! 😅
Glad for you. Your hip is fine?
Yes thank you. All good.
👍🏻
War never produces good things. But enemies turned into friends?
Not friends. The two men of the story have not become friends. They have just agreed to stop being enemies. Which basically was the basis for the creation of the European Union. After 1000 years of waging war between the French, the English, the Spanish, the Germans, we all got together and agreed to form a union based on commerce. it worked. For more than 70 years. Now the war is coming form the other side… Sigh…
The world is never at peace.
It is. At times. I have lately begun to think that peace is a consequence of war. Not the opposite. In a way, it is well possible that we “need” war, despite its horrors, so that when war ends, people rest, promise “never again”, and for a while it becomes true. Until they forget. And the cycle starts again.
Hopefully, peace will come back.
Politics is so messy in our country, most of those in power are crooks. So many people are hungry, I guess there is no peace for them. These politicians want is to amass wealth for their pockets, never mind if the rising prices of commodities are so high that not all people could reach.
I know. Thought about you after the last election. People never learn do they? And inflation is soaring around the entire world… Darn.
The war to end all wars to end all wars to end all wars…
And so on and so forth…
Feliz Navidad Rebe… 🤗
Felices fiestas a ti y los tuyos, Brian!
🙏🏻
Great story!
Reminded me of the movie All Quiet on the Western Front. Have you seen the latest remake?
I don’t think I’ve seen either the original or the remake. Lemme see.
Nope. neither have I read the book. By Erich-Maria Remarque? My father had it. I wonder where the book is… Hmmm.
I haven’t read the book but typically, books are always better. 😉
haha! Yes. Books are almost always better. With a few exceptions here and there. “Out of Africa”, the movie was at par with the book. The actors. The location. The photography… Just perfect.
I very much agree with you on Out of Africa.
How very insightful, Brian
Thank you Derrick. It’s the kind of insight one wishes not to have… 😉
Indeed
Ordinary people keep thinking – and sometimes yelling – “never again”.
Murderers (allegedly) ruling the world keep thinking – and sometimes saying – “who cares”.
Guess who gets the final word each and every time… 😦
Who could ever make it truly be never again forever…?
Indeed. But still, it worked in Western Europe for more than 70 years. Not too bad, given our historical war & peace balance.
I guess we’re gonna have to fight again.
Joyeux Noël all the same, my friend. I’m glad you’re still around. 😉🤗
Yeah, the peace seems to last a little longer every time. Maybe in a million years we might have an entire century of peace… 🙄
Thank you, already extended my wishes at your new article. Bad seeds don’t die easily…? 😛
Take care. 🙂
LOL. I doubt this species will last a million more years… 🤣
There was a saying in French about “les mauvaises graines” (bad seeds) but I forgot the other half. Must be something along the same lines…
Buona notte.
Human race is a bad seed itself so it just may survive too much for its own good. 😉
Why do you always have such good points? 😉
Maybe someone from a galaxy far far away is whispering to me the right answers to all the wrong questions. 🙂
So you too are hearing voices?
I thought I was the only one… 😉
Shhh… don’t tell anyone…

My lips are sealed… Take care…
It seems world peace remains out of reach. Deep thoughts Brian. 🌺🕊
The explanation probably comes from Hannah Arendt. (Look the movie up if you can). She wrote that every human being has to reinvent the world from the minute s/he is born. We don’t pass memory on genetically. She was thinking of the importance of education. Precisely to pass the memory on.
The limitation of that, is that, after a while, new people are born, and more and more, and they gradually forget the horrors of war. And some new bastards think they will get away with it. But they won’t.
Stay safe dearest Holly.
Fröliche Weihnnachten.
💐
So true dear Brian wishing you a lovely peaceful day. 💖
💕
But they do dear Crispin. They don’t string ’em up any more Mussolini style. They tweet semi-angry words, yawn, scratch and then pick up the TV remote…
Very true, Agatha. Which is why I practically never watch the Telly any more… 😉
I pray it may be so, a powerful story .
Do pray for us. I hope you still have a direct line with above.
🙏🏻
Merry Christmas Paul.
Merry Christmas Brian (I think that line might well be compromised) 😉
Compromised? Darn. Can’t get through to customer service anymore, can you?
Lol
The number you have dialed cannot be reached a the moment. Try our chat…
O, I forgot to pay my IT providers bill
That must be it.
Lol
A very moving story. Never again seems to always be an empty promise and I am always wondering why that is.
Thank you. Maybe because humans are just stupid? At least many of them?
Merry Christmas Robbie.
A beautiful fairytale!
Viel Dank. “Fairytale”… Yes. In a way. Though that fairytale has preserved peace in Europe for more than 70 years… Not too bad.
Fröhliche Weihnachten… 🎄
The scene is sadly realistic. Young men sent into war, looking for glory learn the hard way that they’re pawns in a horribly needless fight. The soldiers that are able to recognize their adversaries as peers are to be admired.
Unfortunately, maniacal and power-hungry sociopaths somehow manage to wiggle their way into power and history repeats.
Yes. Now the two men can be anything. Soldiers. Civilians. Officers. We don’t know. Does it matter? 😉
What matters are some of the bastards who keep popping up. Everywhere. Over and over again.
🙏🏻
Cool. I hadn’t thought about this possibly being civilians.
It’s what I like about this story. We don’t know who they are. They can be anybody. Just two people caught in a war.
(I say “like” because I personally believe the stories come to me in a way. I just write them down. 😉)
One can only hope. Why is it hard for us to learn? Lovely reminder, lovely story.
Thank you. Not sure how lovely the story is. 😉 But yes, it is a reminder…
As to why we can’t learn, look up Hanna Arendt…
Hope you are well.
Merry Chrsitmas.
Love it. And yet, war is a constant.
Thank you. Yes. Sadly, it is a constant. My brothers and I are the first men in my family for a long time who haven’t gone to war…
Thank you for your visit and comment.
Merry Christmas…
🙏🏻
The sad irony. Many would rather live in peace and within their means. But then, who cares what the common majority think? It’s not their place to decide who dies or lives. Leave that to the ‘powerful and privileged’. Shame…
Shame indeed. So many in my family have died in wars. Many of my grandfather’s brothers and cousins…
And the powerful keep ravaging the world…
Shame…
I’ve really enjoyed the creativity of your writing, Brian. The beauty is in the way you tell the story, a great read on its own – but with significant meaning behind your words. “We can’t really keep on like that, can we?” And I think of what is going on in Ukraine and wonder how it ever to this point… and where do we go from here. Great writing, keep ’em coming!
Thank you Dalo. You’re only too kind. I “wrote” this story in my head about 20 years ago. (I always do that, then it may take year to go down on paper. The key points in the story are the two men face down on the ground, “we can’t keep on like that, can we?” And “never again.”.
Which is basically what the West in general, and the french in particular did with Germany. Look each other in the eye and say: “enough”.
Now, much, much later, Ukraine is back in the same predicament. Until R*ssia is forced to back off, bombs will continue to fall. Sadly.
Now, on the bright side, wars always come to an end… The sooner the better…
Cheers.
You have been in the mood to write again lately. I love it.
Thank you. Writing a bit and translating old stories… 😉